I've had a preview of his (he's in the revision stage now) and I was disheartened to see that he has latched on to the same awful trope of the bad poem as me - the pun. He has based his rhyme around craic and crack. I must say, it's promisingly bad.
Tag: prufrock
June 13th – It was a slow day, and the sun was beating, on the soldiers on the side of the road.
He seems to have but one attribute - an obvious schoolboy cunning, to put with his natural disposition: a sort of easy authority which belongs only to grown-ups.
Dickie White's Diary 
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